Something that you cannot touch…but it touches you…something you can’t see…but something you can feel…something that gives you immense pleasure…real…that warms you…chills you…makes you cry…makes you smile…makes you Alive…? Gives you a reality…your reality…which despite being unreal makes you real…which calls out to you…at all times of the day…urging …tempting…threatening …scolding …begging …knowing…
“Come…come away with Me…just this once…won’t ask you to come again…I kno you need Me…I kno you want Me…I kno you want to come with Me…I don’t need you…I have many waiting for Me…but I m waiting for you…come…”
“I m inside you…I m outside you…I m all around you…I m You…we are one…no one can separate us…we are together forever…no one can ever come between us...”
“Come on…you think I will wait for you forever… am here just for the moment…will be gone before you can even breathe out…” “My love…take a look at the world…our world…through my eyes…the rain…calling out to us…the flowers smiling at us…the birds chirping at us…the sky waiting for us…the trees waving at us…the wind moving with us…the grass looking up to us…can you still ignore Me…my wait for you…your need for Me? Can you really?? Do you forget the time we had together…the laughter…the smiles…the tears…the cries? The pain… the sorrow…your promise to meet Me tomorrow?”
“It wasn’t easy to spend the night waiting for you…you kno I like you better than quite a lot of those people around you…you are better than many of those I have been with…n I kno we can achieve greater heights…with our love for each other…I kept of thinking of it all the whole night…and I kno you have been doing the same…dreaming of Me…dreaming of Us…is it not?? You kno you can’t lie to me…I kno you are thinking of Me all the time…even when you are engaged in doing some other things of your world…but you can’t be away from Me for long…can u now?? Come on …look at yourself…you are dying to be with Me…come…come away with Me”
His tempting…tantalizing words get to me…hypnotize me…beckon me to runaway…runaway with Him…I rise…n lose myself completely into it…into Him…forgetting the world in the ecstasy…of Him and me…the happiness…the joy…the celebration of love…between Him and me…the heartbreak…the death…the “birha” …the wait…for Him in me…the rain…the sun…the fields…the river…the hills…the animals…the fog…the mist…the intense cold…n just Him and me…the crowds absent…n just Him and me…His inspiration…and Him in me…within me…my Heart…my Blood…my Veins…my Eyes…my Soul…my Love…my Life…
I kno that You will not leave me…forsake my need for You…You will come to me when I need You…n when You want me…You know I will be waiting…waiting for You…waiting for Us…You…my Master…my Dance…me Your slave…Your Danseuse...
“Come…come away with Me…just this once…won’t ask you to come again…I kno you need Me…I kno you want Me…I kno you want to come with Me…I don’t need you…I have many waiting for Me…but I m waiting for you…come…”
“I m inside you…I m outside you…I m all around you…I m You…we are one…no one can separate us…we are together forever…no one can ever come between us...”
“Come on…you think I will wait for you forever… am here just for the moment…will be gone before you can even breathe out…” “My love…take a look at the world…our world…through my eyes…the rain…calling out to us…the flowers smiling at us…the birds chirping at us…the sky waiting for us…the trees waving at us…the wind moving with us…the grass looking up to us…can you still ignore Me…my wait for you…your need for Me? Can you really?? Do you forget the time we had together…the laughter…the smiles…the tears…the cries? The pain… the sorrow…your promise to meet Me tomorrow?”
“It wasn’t easy to spend the night waiting for you…you kno I like you better than quite a lot of those people around you…you are better than many of those I have been with…n I kno we can achieve greater heights…with our love for each other…I kept of thinking of it all the whole night…and I kno you have been doing the same…dreaming of Me…dreaming of Us…is it not?? You kno you can’t lie to me…I kno you are thinking of Me all the time…even when you are engaged in doing some other things of your world…but you can’t be away from Me for long…can u now?? Come on …look at yourself…you are dying to be with Me…come…come away with Me”
His tempting…tantalizing words get to me…hypnotize me…beckon me to runaway…runaway with Him…I rise…n lose myself completely into it…into Him…forgetting the world in the ecstasy…of Him and me…the happiness…the joy…the celebration of love…between Him and me…the heartbreak…the death…the “birha” …the wait…for Him in me…the rain…the sun…the fields…the river…the hills…the animals…the fog…the mist…the intense cold…n just Him and me…the crowds absent…n just Him and me…His inspiration…and Him in me…within me…my Heart…my Blood…my Veins…my Eyes…my Soul…my Love…my Life…
I kno that You will not leave me…forsake my need for You…You will come to me when I need You…n when You want me…You know I will be waiting…waiting for You…waiting for Us…You…my Master…my Dance…me Your slave…Your Danseuse...
23 comments:
Wow, awesome way to express ur Love to ur dance good work :)
whoaaaa...! phew! some emotions!
too good. :) ...and the blog name, simplicity...??? i dont think
so! :)
keep writing!
cheers!
wow, I just came in from orkut to leave a Comment...but this post captivated my imagination and made me to think bout my lost love.
Ur honest and simple emotions get connected to readers imagination quickly.
keep up the good work...and hope to see more of ur writings reglulary.
The post is very captivating. i must have read it four times. Go work keep going.
some beautiful thoughts penned down..
good work..
those were very very strong emotions!!
thnk u...all... :P wll the intention had been to portray the luv i hav for dance (n i m nt trained dancer...i dance as i said...only for myslf...)n also to bluff...to reveal the 2 characters only at the end...creating a no. of possiblities as to who the might b..i wanted to bring out a sense of sensuality...i hope i achieved smthng out of it...though i m nt entirely happy wid this 1...need to improve on the ingredients of sensuousness.. !!
emotions portrayed very well. though i would like to suggest you, try n avoid using so many full-stops '.' agreed that you wanted to bring out the desperation, but the first impression it gives is that 'chhodho yaar, nahi padhenge isko'. (leave yaar!! skip it)
that is just my opinion. btw, thanks for ur comment. looking forward to you becoming a regular reader of my blog and vice versa :)
well...tht wsnt fullstops..tht ws to indicate continuation...n since thre r only 3 minuscul dots on screen...i dnt thnk tht wud imply skippng it.. !! n yes..i unnerstnd hindi..(cud hav done widout translating it..) bt well nywyz...thnx for the suggestion..n m too mch in2 the habit of using these dots...
hehe......dots - nice topic for a blog :P
awesome....remember jennifer lopez teaching dancing to richard gere in shall we dance with me, when he refuses to "give his soul" to the dance. the place where she says - dance is a vertical expression of a horizontal desire....
and one of the lady, after seeing the performance says - anybody needs a glass of water.
after reading ur post, i was transported there. and i did too reach out for a glass of water!!
wow! the blog's url seems almost like a misnomer after reading this post... such complex emotions, expressed with such finesse and detailing... probably thats where ur simplicity lies : in expressing the most complex of emotions in such a lucid yet effective manner...
kudos!
thnx ya...m really overwhlmd...nthng to say
for a moment i felt lost trying to figure out where it is heading ;) nice work
you hav very beutifully put ur thoughts into words...simple yet so deep in meaning
nice post to read :)
may i add ur blog to my list?
@viraj...yes......definitly...errrr.. i mean...sre ..y nt?? :P:D
@anupriya
dear i asked d owner of d blog. in ne case u dont hav ne profile either. so cant add u :(
for owner of the blog:
it wud be easier for people to read d posts of their interest if u add lables to ur post. hope u take it in positive light. cheers :)
Its like an ulessys of thoughts....one of its kind...awesome!!!!
Well i ve never come across such beautiful penning down of your own mind...
Gr8 control of pen while letting the soul do the talking. I like your style of naration.
Hey ! very nicely put down emotions. Just randomly strayed to ur blog, but guess will try to be a regular.
~ Aqua
i travelled to a different land altogether while reading this love ode of yours...:)
its strange hw the same kind of emotions can be felt for so many situations or states together...
well hey thre...thnk u for the compliments...
@viraj... tht ws me ...i wrote from annupriya's (my frnd) profile by mishtake...shorri... :P
n yes...u cn blog roll my blog...thnx for tht...n for the suggestion as well.. !!
@aashika... thts ws exactly my intention...n i thnk i hav been succesful to quite an extent...yeeeeaaa..wt say you ??
yes uve definately been successful...:)
chck out this link..www.mmsc-manipal.com....maybe we need ppl who know how to express themselves in this particular event happening in Manipal...its a media convention for all those who are connected to the internet....there is a blogger's meet too...i guess you'll find it interesting...keep posting:
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yeh ladki pagal hai aadhi raat ko comment karne ko keh rahi hai
but
mast hai yaara
ur luv for dance can b felt while readin this article
keep writin
cheers....
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